Salam,first thing first,i am very sad with incomplete condition.He is a resilient young people who face various problem.such a strong lifestory and inspiration you are dude you are amazing.we should feel grateful that the situation we with perfect.I feel impressed by the ability is in Nick Vujicic.although physically he is not perfect but the way he lives as normal human .Example, he can swim, play golf and music instruments.words he stimulates my enthusiasm for learning hard class.Expecially, subjects in the language of my poor english.
Sunday, February 7, 2010
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Hye Hadri!I would like to see you write more in English..Your comments are okay..but you can give more than this..there are mistakes here and there, please take note about it..especially in terms of punctuation, grammar(tenses use), subject verb agreement...Anyway, at least you have tried your best.Give a litte bit more okay, you can make it.Insya Allah.:)
Ya you should improve your sentence and try to be alert with your grammar.But after all it is a good job
you should be carefully when writing and be alert with your grammar..good job bro..he2
After fullstop use capital latter.
Improve your english.
you should improve your skill in writing to make your essay become more interesting........
good work bro.keep it up..
btw dont always be shy..:)
Em..if you put full stop,the word after that should capitalization!or it will be suspeded sentences..ok
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